[@ACHTUNG]: I mean, honestly I think that you're still not quite clicking on what the difference between concept and archetype is. Concepts are meant to be [i]relatively[/i] broad categories but also things that inspired imagination and legends. One of the more modern ones is "Winchester" which is a famous rifle manufacturer associated with the Wild West and the modernization of firearms.

And that's [i]still[/i] broad because it can generally be applied to the idea of those guns. Your concept being a specific person doesn't really work. I think you're overthinking it as well and kind of pidgeon holing yourself into an overly narrow set of abilities.

If you're really attached to the military theme and the cloning abilities, "Army" would make sense.

[@Ammokkx]: Yeah sorry she's meant to be [i]extremely[/i] new. ^^;

That's fine.