[@Sini] Hahaha thanks. That's definitely going to be his Darth name. [@Ellri] Since the meat of this is on the force section, I'll just post the revised version here. [hider=Simplified report on known Force techniques and estimated levels.] [center] [color=silver] For many Sith the rawest forms of true passion lie at the source of their mystical power in the force. For Kutar there is no exception, rage is the lifeblood of his strength, but not in the way one might expect. Kutar's anger manifests itself in a rather unique form, and for him there is very little outward aggression except in times of extreme duress. The rage lies beneath, hidden from the senses and smoldering away like the embers of a forge. Where a bonfire flares bright and burns itself out, Kutar has mastered a steady unyielding force, only unleashed at full near the battle's conclusion. This control over his anger presents itself foremost in his ability to manipulate his own body. Giving him speed, stamina and a strength that far outlasts most others. In sustained usage Kutar is strong, it is only against the most passionate and wroth foes that he meets his match. In most basic and intermediate force abilities he has advanced knowledge with intermediate application, but in particular he wields significant understanding and the capacity to preform self enhancements even mid battle. By his own nature he is not a talented force practitioner, and has reached this level of power through rigorous training and study. Unlike his almost natural physical prowess his more mystical power required years of hard work to develop. He does have one notorious talent, that is his near masterful control over draining his opponents of energy and sapping them of their reserves. Although he spent decades mastering force drain Kutar took to the ability like a tick to blood, and now it is almost second nature to him. [/color] [/center] [hider=Compiled List] [list] [b][u]Basic Abilities[/u][/b] [*] [i]Force Empathy[/i] [*] [i]Detoxify Poison[/i] [*] [i]Force Stun[/i] [*] [i]Breath Control[/i] [*] [i]Force Deflection[/i] [b][u]Intermediate Abilities[/u][/b] [*] [i]Telekinesis/Force Throw[/i] [*] [i]Telekinetic Defense[/i] [*] [i]Force Sight (Basic)[/i] [*] [i]Force Sense[/i] [*] [i]Precognition[/i] [*] [i]Dominate Mind[/i] [*] [i]Crucitorn[/i] [*] [i]Force Choke[/i] [*] [i]Droid Disable[/i] [*] [i]Tapas[/i] [u][b]Advanced Abilities [/b][/u] [*] [i]Force Bellow[/i] [*] [i]Force Speed[/i] [*] [i]Force Jump[/i] [*] [i]Force Rage[/i] [b][u]Well-Trained Talent[/u][/b] [*] [i]Force Drain[/i] [/list] [/hider] [/hider] The key addition, one I admittedly overlooked was a greater explanation of his lack on innate talent. I think it was briefly mentioned in his 'interview' but I made it clearer here. I also added a basic abilities section to the list as asked, to flesh out his force abilities a bit more, just added a few random ones from the provided list. Lastly I changed his final tab to well-trained talent and added Force Rage as requested. [quote=@Ellri] [list] [*]Why does he have a faulty cybernetic arm? has Darth Embrus refused him to acquire anything more reliable? [/list] [/quote] Yes actually, Darth Embrus is very displeased with his student at the moment. On a writing level I want his arm to be something of a character development award later on. So when he overcomes his failure its something he earns, and getting a 'better' cybernetic arm will represent this growth. [quote=@Ellri] [list][*]Out of curiosity... Is there a reason you chose such great height? Anything you intend to play on/explore ICly with that? [/list] [/quote] Yes actually, there should be a number of things that come up. One writing point for example is his preference towards larger bombers with plenty of room for activities over compact fighters that are meant to house six feet of leg room at most. He's gonna have trouble like that constantly, little Padawans hiding in little hidey-holes he can't follow, getting sniped from hundreds of meters away because he stands out like a sore thumb, a considerable lack of stealth capabilities. Moreover I wanted a character that would be physically intimidating on the simple merits of being way to large. [center] [img]https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQoH6KMoSvUha_T4B3L6Y0ozxHaRaI3KHcNvaUXiTS5g9iWpIVg[/img] [/center]