Good stuff, but I have suggestions to make.

When writing an IC post, try to describe what your character sees, hears, and feels. Anything they sense of their surroundings, really. Try and go into lots of detail there. It'll help give life to the RP. In Google Maps, look at photos and go into Street View. They'll give you a good idea of what things look like.

Admittedly, I'm shit at writing, but I do have ideas on how to make a scene feel more alive.