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Also, I'd like to add that I'm not trying to make Max a super perfect ultra mega badass gary stu, just a troubled teen with an interesting and painful past. If it ever comes off that way, PLEASE let me know, and I we can discuss it.
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No worries, it's not a person's background that makes them one-dimensional, it's how they behave. I'm generally willing to give most characters the benefit of the doubt in the beginning (not that my opinion matters since I'm not the GM :P). But on that note, I hope Saya doesn't come off as a Mary Sue either.

I also completely forgot that Rangers should have some sort of fighting ability, which I totally didn't consider when making Saya. I'll edit my post so that she learned Judo (and archery) from her father.

EDIT

Sorry, the bow is Pink's weapon, Yellow's is twin daggers. I will make the change accordingly.