[quote=Stern Algorithm] No worries, it's not a person's background that makes them one-dimensional, it's how they behave. I'm generally willing to give most characters the benefit of the doubt in the beginning (not that my opinion matters since I'm not the GM :P). But on that note, I hope Saya doesn't come off as a Mary Sue either.I also completely forgot that Rangers should have some sort of fighting ability, which I totally didn't consider when making Saya. I'll edit my post so that she learned Judo (and archery) from her father. [/quote] You could always have her learn how to fight as things progress. It'd be a great way to develop the character. They should all change in some way after becoming rangers after all...