I've read it and there were only minor mistakes. I make more mistakes than you do, because I usually skip proofreading and go straight to bed. Sleep is very important, I'm not minding those minor errors. :) I just read one of my older posts for reference and found a number of errors like missing words and this phrase - "four of us [i]is[/i]" 

I promise to proofread from now on. Haha! So embarrassing!

One question though. Were you referring to the one Nick and his friends captured the night before Nick & Claire's wedding? 

Another question (sorry). Should Claire be in the room when Nick wakes up in the morning?