Regarding siblings... Where did you infer that from? I don't think I mentioned it at all? Either way, it wasn't my intention for her to have siblings. I did mention her parents, but they're not really relevant (or really even present) As for her fame, yeah, I wasn't really intending for her to be super fabulous or anything. First of all, I didn't imagine her real identity would be known at all, aside from her parents who would know that she is working as a model. But the public wouldn't have any connection between her real image and her digital avatar. Serenade would be recognizable from advertising, and people would know that she is a model, but that wouldn't be connected to her job as a corrector. It's like leading a double life. There's Serenade the model, that people would know of, and then Serenade the Corrector, who nobody would know of except other correcters. 'Sarah Blaise' wouldn't be known to anybody. Unless from that bit you meant that she wouldn't be allowed to use the same avatar for modelling as she did for her work as Corrector? Or that modeling as an avatar is totally improbable, and that the modeling would need to be done in person? (Sorry if my questions are roundabout or hard to understand, I'm just going through layers here trying to get a sense for it >.>) I didn't originally intend for her to be all that well-known outside of the general sphere of 'Canada' since I assume most countries would prefer to keep their Correctors a secret, and I doubt any outside country would be using Canadian government propaganda or ad campaigns. I tried to keep my fame and skill level relative to just that sphere so that I didn't come off as super famous or the best. She's just one of the most veteran in the country, so other Canadian Correctors are familiar with her name and skill. Hopefully that clarifies things a bit. I'm more than willing to make any hard changes, I just wanted to be sure we were talking about the same things when I did. Edit: Also, for good measure, good luck on your final. Take your time to do whatever you need to do, I'll be around, I'm sure.