[@viktorseier] Me too!

[@silentfeather] Looks good. Here is what you may want to fix.... (we are almost there) you said dark skin in hair color and pale skin in skin (lol!) And you have her growing up in the shadowlands. No human, elf, or dwarf can survive in the Shadow lands. It is covered in hot, noxious gas clouds full of soot and ash. Yer mum couldn't have lived there. Also, the Ragnork are very... very private about their war table meetings and everything else. I think k it worked better when she was raised in Evolin (the elf lands) or you could put them as Nomadic in the desert or maybe a tent house near the Great Well (read above under the Nomads). Or they hop from town to town. Last thing, pick one of the following traits: skin that is not effected by salt water or skin that is not burned. Also, keen elven reflexes or able to breath noxious air.

Other than that, you should be good to go.