[quote=@Izurich] [@Yam I Am] Aaaand my CS is up for review! [hider=Teratoma] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/AlqGep5.jpg[/img][/center] [indent][hider=Theme][youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oAJC1Pn78ZA[/youtube][/hider] [color=58fd7b][b]Full Name:[/b][/color] Teratoma [color=58fd7b][b]Nickname(s):[/b][/color] Terra, The Fleshweaver, "AAAAGH!! PLEASE DON'T EAT M-!" [color=58fd7b][b]Sex:[/b][/color] Female (Gender), Asexual (Sex) [color=58fd7b][b]Age:[/b][/color] Irrelevant (Biologically), 30 (Chronologically) [color=58fd7b][b]Race:[/b][/color] Shoggoth [hider=Visual References] [center][img]https://i.imgur.com/rBshaDj.jpg[/img][/center] [/hider] [color=58fd7b][b]Appearance:[/b][/color] In her truest unadulterated form, Teratoma - like the rest of her species - can be visually described as a mass of pulsating red flesh, able to shape and form appendages such as tentacles, horns, a mouth full of teeth, and other organic features at will. However, she has a favorite humanoid facade in the form of a young girl with dark green hair and leaf green eyes, standing at about 130cm (4'3") tall. She never wears actual clothes as she can simply form imitations of them, such as the 'sundress' of her human form. [hr] [color=58fd7b][b]Background:[/b][/color] The product of one human alchemist's hubris, Terra is an eldritch abomination, one of the children of a cosmic horror only known as "The Mother of a Thousand Young". Said alchemist, wanting to possess a biologically perfect lifeform to further his research into the Elixir of Immortality, dabbled into the occult, his ambitions unfettered by such petty things such as morality and wisdom. After years of study and pouring countless fortune to fund numerous excavation projects, he finally found it, an ancient tome of such eldritch magic that reading it alone could send one spiraling into madness. However, he was determined, immortality shall be his! Decades were spent deciphering the tome bit by bit, until at one point, he scraped enough information to enact a ritual that'd summon the perfect lifeform, one that's unshackled by the burdens of the human body, able to alter their biological composition at will, immune to the ravages of old age, and capable of healing through any non-fatal wounds given enough time. Just perfect, if he could bring forth this creature and harness its essence then he too could be immortal, him and the rest of humanity once he shares this gift to others. No more shall mankind be shackled by a fleeting existence. The ritual went forth and he... succeeded. There it was, right in front of him, the [i]perfect[/i] lifeform- -and the first thing this creature did to repay her summoner was to assimilate him, now he was one with her, becoming immortal just as he wished. The ritual itself was so foul and just plain [i]wrong[/i] that it attracted the attention of both the Demon Lord and the Goddess of Light, but fortunately for the creature, the forces belonging to the former found her first and decided to take the lost critter in, whereas the latter would've simply struck her down in the name of their so-called holy goddess. The Demons named her "Teratoma", and in exchange for a family and home, she pledged her loyalty to Lord Ahriman and Sheol. By her many tentacles, she would vanquish all those who stood against Him, no matter who they are, church, heroes, soldiers. But no one said it's wrong to have a little bit of fun while doing so~ [color=58fd7b][b]Skills and Abilities:[/b][/color] Teratoma is an amorphous organic entity that possesses nigh-perfect control of her own metabolism. In practice, she's able to morph, shape, and sculpt her body at will, forming new appendages and organs simply by willing them. The application of this trait is practically only limited by her own creativity. Furthermore, by consuming the biomass of other creatures or individuals, she'll be able to mimic their physical features perfectly, although this is only limited to said physical features, excluding intangible things such as magical boons, personality, and memories. She possesses biological immortality, able to advance or reverse her biological age at will, and as long as her 'core' stays intact, able to regenerate from all manner of wounds given enough time. However, destroying said core will kill her off for good. She can pretty much absorb any organic material as sustenance, even if they're otherwise harmful to the common man such as poison and rotten material. Assimilated material can be used to hasten her regeneration among other things. While she needs to eat and rest, she doesn't need to breath. Physical blows inflicted upon her by a non-magical weapon will simply be shrugged off as if one is striking a bundle of jelly, however, she's particularly sensitive to cold temperatures so things such as cryomancy is quite effective against her. For example, freezing parts of her body in order to shatter them with a follow-up strike is a valid tactic to employ against her. She has extraordinary sense of touch and smell, but in return, she possesses poor vision and hearing. [color=58fd7b][b]Quips:[/b][/color][list] [*]Her faceclaim and main inspiration is Saya from Saya no Uta, sprinkled witth a bit of The Thing movie and Carrion video game. [*]Terra is not evil in the traditional sense of being actively malicious, she just has an unorthodox set of morals and standards being an eldritch entity summoned from the depths of the cosmos. [*]Terra has an eccentric hobby of collecting the brains of enemies she deems worthy, frustrating, infuriating, or any combination of these. She keeps them in jars of self-made preserving liquid so she can play with them. No one knows for sure where she got this hobby, some said one of the Demons taught her, some said she came up with it herself, who knows. [/list] [/indent] [/hider] [/quote] Hey, looking pretty good. I can't see much to critique so far.