Okay, as I mentioned to the co-gm, my problem with Wyndressa is a couple of things:

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[*]Her powers feel a bit underdeveloped. I'm especially having a difficult time differentiating her vampiric blood magic and her demonic magic. This is odd, considering that I have references that do. But, I think the problem is that I'm basing this completely off the Bloodhunter from D&D, which kinda merges these things together.
[*]Her backstory feels unvague and unfocused. I realize this is something of a flaw in my character development: I often try to avoid the typical "family's dead, seeking revenge" tragedy that most people write. But, then I have a difficult time making a character's motivation seem interesting.
[*]Oh, and I forgot her weapons and equipment.
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