[@Smike]
Looked over it this morning before work and love the creativity adding in new ideas. I'll roll them into the world lore and it may have an impact on the area and your character going forward ;)

[@Senhara]
Holy crap that's quite a lot to deal with I'm sorry and completely get that. If you decide to step back for now and/or step into the story later that's fine, I get it you have stuff to handle.