[quote=@Scribe of Thoth]
[@Crusader Lord]
There’s a handful of minor inconsistencies in your backstory like some of the years not lining up (which I’m assuming are from the edits) but she’s accepted after those are fixed.
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Yeah, I did type the whole backstory in one go late at night and while partly asleep. Expected to need to do some fixing edits in that case, but am happy to do so!

I just did some fixes to said backstory before I have to leave for work today, including the years lining up bit I believe, but have to rush off to work now as well for the rest of this evening. 

I think I might have it fixed fully now!