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[center][@Ebil Bunny] [h2][color=7ea7d8]Manny Ryi[/color][/h2]
[color=A9A8AF]1. After some delegation, we ask that you remove the teleportation aspect of her gift. Not dying (reincarnation) is pretty powerful by itself, plus you can shapeshift into different animals; that seems pretty sufficient for a Mystic gift. The teleportation element seemed more like a tacked-on gimmick that doesn't really have anything to do with reincarnation. Plus, teleportation would be an Astra gift, not Somatic. 

2. Please clarify what you mean by "if her aeonheart is triggered with". We didn't quite understand with this meant. What are some examples of this that you thought of?

3. Is this character unrecognizable to other people every time she reincarnates? Please clarify that.

4. So we assume that the image in her character profile pic is her "base form". Please clarify whether she does, or rather, can she ever go back to her base form. This kind of plays into the 3rd bullet above, but informs us on whether the other players can ever recognize her whenever she reincarnates into a new form, whether human or animal.
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1 - Excellent point, I removed it

2 - I imagined that since her aeonheart is the source of a power to reincarnate upon death, it would itself "reincarnate" if it would otherwise "die".  Things I had in mind when I wrote "if her aeonheart is interfered with" were any injuries or surgeries (like the Forsaken Ritual) that would cause it to no longer work, or any mystic abilities/enchanted tools that would alter or dampen the ability in some way.  Example being Myrion's Second Trigger, which while strictly beneficial would still be affecting it

3 - Manny has a completely new appearance every time she reincarnates and does not have a base form, her original appearance being permanently lost to time when her ability first activated.  She is still generally recognizable though since she's always a girl of the same age, each incarnation comes with clothes of a style unique to her magic, and she's not especially adept nor interested in blending in.  If she changed clothes and tried acting differently (and took a large number of vocal lessons, her accent's pretty strong and there aren't many other Yhartans around) then she'd likely not be recognized unless someone was observant.  I edited the Appearance section of the CS as well, hopefully it's more clear now ^^

4 - I added profile pictures since not having one would be inconsistent with the style of the other character sheets, and focused more on the attitude and emotions being conveyed by the pictures rather than physical traits (other than being a young teenage girl).  I tried to select pictures that varied to some degree in terms of hair/eye colors and hairstyles for that reason, but they were all generated from the same image so are still pretty similar

Thanks for the feedback, and I hope this cleared things up! :)