[quote=@Letter Bee]
[@Guardian Angel Haruki], can you comment on my sheet to see if I did anything wrong?
[/quote]

Sure thing!

Your character sheet looks great! You've got everything that [@Lewascan2] and I put into our sheets.

I do have a question: From what I'm reading of the Enhanced Human, it sounds like mechanically Daniel would be a Variant Human with the Keen Mind feat. Do I have that right? 

The only other question that comes to mind would be how would he be friends with the rest of the party? Chances are Daniel would probably be the youngest member of the party. We can establish connections for this character. Maybe he's related to one of the party members as a relative?