[quote=@Jay009]
Hi everyone, that was great writing from everyone.  I loved reading the posts.  I am so glad to be here and to be part of this group.  

[@Zool]I will write the idea we discussed ages ago, seems like a good time to get it out in the story.


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As it is the end of the week and I wasn't sure if the story is getting pushed forward, I kinda rushed out a lot of conversational dialogue.  But I've left lots and lots of gaps for you to insert whatever actions and dialogue you want into it all.  And there's a lot of 'ifs' too, in case there's stuff you don't want to use.  Please use my post however you want, control my character if needed.

If I messed up in any way, let me know and I'll edit xD