[quote=@Shadrack Nor]
[@Legend Begins] Okay then... here goes nothing... let me know how bad i just messed up in my first post 😅😶‍🌫️
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Really good for a first shot! Just a couple minor items:

We always use asterisks for actions. Just a formatting thing. On the sentences themselves,

[code]I wink at the dame beside me, her eyes sparkling with a mixture of amusement and admiration. She knows a real man when she sees one, even if he's a little out of place in this futuristic saloon.[/code]

Sentence 1 is stellar. Absolutely perfect. Sentence 2 is more of a thought than something observable in this case. If I were you, I'd tie it back to something a third-party observer could pick up on, like [code]*Winks at the dame beside me, her eyes sparkling with a mixture of amusement and admiration. She seems to eye my physique, although marginally perturbed by the clash between my outfit and the saloon*[/code]

Same applies to the other action. First sentence nails it, the next few are more thoughts. No qualms on the dialogue, that's effectively free ball. Nice work!