[@Aku the Samurai]: Hm. I still don't think this Contract Ability screams Orochi, and it kind of blocks out anyone else who might want to go for an elemental focus. I think you should lean into the snake elements more and set up a different contract from the outset. There's other serpents or potential ideas for serpents(an OC snake god could still be pretty serious business) you could go for. [@RoadkilBanana]: You should probably look up some actual Japanese names before naming characters. While I did kind of hope to see this sort of contract thematically, I feel like your power is way too weak for B. B's not particularly weak, it's the higher end of average. [@King Cosmos]: Lighting fires on eye contact is a bit too much, since it's a pretty potent ability that'll immediately handle most threats. I'd say try and figure out a different effect or find ways to make it a little more restrained so it's not an inescapable autohit.