[@ERode] Very nice! I do have two things to point out, though. Based on what we can see from [url=https://i.imgur.com/ibQGfLV.png]this map[/url], for some weird reason Tabata has an offset compass rose on the continent. This means that the Spade Kingdom is less north (despite it being wintery, right?) and more west. It wouldn't [i]necessarily[/i] change her backstory that much, I don't think, I just wanted to point it out in case you wanted to specify any locations later on. Secondly, I'm not so much against her Fear being what it is, but I think it's her reaction or view of it. Fears can be simple things like just "don't wanna die," although I think it's a little better when they're more about insecurities or trauma, but they should be things that actually provoke emotional response in the character. If she were shown a vision of what she fears, all the things she gave up in pursuit of her goal, and could still say "worth" then I feel like it doesn't really mean much? Let me know your thoughts on it, as other than this I'd basically be fine Accepting.