I understand these are WIPs, just my thoughts on what may be cleaned up or clarified.

[@RoseKnightJason] 

[hider=Kobe Abiko]
I love incorporating part of the story into your background, very unique. Just be aware that it takes four years to graduate the academy so he would be 28-29 if he died at 24 and joined the academy soon afterwards.

Nimble Fury: I can accept this being as powerful with a low cooldown, with the offset that it drains a decent amount of spirit energy with each consecutive use. At least until it's upgraded.

Your Zanpakuto Type would most likely fall into the Power category.[/hider]

[@Teyao]

[hider=Yuto]There's an NPC that uses Iaijutsu style of fighting, which is what your abilities is reminiscent to. That might occur some interest. Just keep in mind what your ability cooldowns and durations will be, I'm more than happy to help in this department if need be.

Is there a limit to how much spirit energy is accumulated or is it ever growing? Either or is fine, just want clarification.[/hider]

[@RevekaRed]

[Hider=Asami]In my experience with Bleach RPs, Kido & Illusion style Zanpakuto seem to be the most versatile. You have a lot to work with here. I could send you ideas, if you need a kickstart.[/hider]

[@Product]

[hider=Yamato Akinari]
Zanpakuto Type would fall either into Kido or Light. It's really up to you to your discretion as there are Zanpakuto in the manga that have no definitive [i]'type'[/i]. District wise, whatever you feel best fits your clan. 50th and beyond is where life gets extremely rough. In essence, the lower the number the better the living situation.

As for abilities, maybe think a supportive ability. Maybe a flashbang ability that uses light to blind enemies, or creating a construct out of light that fights for you. Skies the limit, my friend. There's also zero shame in drawing inspiration from other [url=https://powerlisting.fandom.com/wiki/Light_Manipulation]series[/url].

Seinaru kainyū no tate: Shield of holy intervention. If this is a simple defensive ability, that blocks attacks [i]within[/i] reason, then a ten-post cooldown is excessive unless you intend for that. Otherwise, you may tone it down to 5 or 6.[/hider]

[@Psyker Landshark]

[hider=Nakajima Ageha]I have nothing more to offer than what you've given me, it seems you know exactly how you want to play your character. Looks fine.[/hider]

[@Kalas]

[hider=Jinzo Iori]
This is probably one of the more challenging abilities I'd have to deal with as a GM. I like it a lot.

I only have one thing: How long would it take someone to realize they're being drained? Is it based on their ability to sense reiatsu like Hidden Reaping or would they have to draw this conclusion and piece it together themselves? Either or is fine, just want clarification. [/hider]