[quote=@RoseKnightJason]
[@Izurich] I'm really sorry to keep asking you to edit your character, but you brought up a very good point in your initial attack post. There's no limitations on Elizabeth's puppet ability. Meaning you can effectively just Darth Vader all my bosses to kill themselves lmao. Could we come up with a trigger for that spell as well? At first I thought of needing a sample of an opponent's blood, but that is also pretty unstoppable for a blood mage. One scratch and you're dead type of consequences there. 

Again I'm really sorry to keep requesting edits and I hope you don't feel singled out!

As a kept bonus ( and to make your first scene canon as well) people with no mana of their own are completely susceptible to the power
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No problem! And yeah, that's a really good point. Fortunately, there's an easy solution for this using your Darth Vader reference. Just like in Star Wars, other "Force users" can resist / repel the Force Telekinesis imposed upon them. Just replace force with mana for our case and voila!

Got it, 'grunt-type' enemies will be completely vulnerable just as they're susceptible to one-hit-KO's from other techniques, haha. 

Also, got an idea to not make the power [i]completely[/i] useless against a boss. Harkening back to that Star Wars reference, what if it's used against a mana-user, the power can only [i]try[/i] to affect a small part of their body for a brief period, sort of to disrupt a single action and it can never be lethal on its own, just like a Jedi vs Sith fight where one uses their force power against the other.