Rejected, even without the history section. The equipment alone is trying to introduce a lot of world building elements into an established setting without having asked any of the GMs first. [i]Neither[/i] of those swords fit, especially not whatever's going on about the "flames of the planet".

And the first one, as an example of elven craftsmanship, is just [i]dismal[/i], even if we're somehow willing to overlook the ordering going on where he apparently joined some other random order [i]after[/i] joining the IR and relying on them to get his armour. Which apparently precedes having decent weapons. 

Seriously, ask questions before trying to write in new even more exclusive groups with ancient weapons.