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Name: Master Chief Petty Officer John-117
Origin: Halo
Appearance:
 [img]https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/4/42/Master_chief_halo_infinite.png[/img]
Personality: Professional, reserved, and determined.

Background: Born "John" in 2511, he is covertly taken from the human colony world of Eridanus as a child and conscripted into the SPARTAN-II super-soldier project by the United Nations Space Command (UNSC)

In the Now: A private headhunter, working jobs in Skyworld.

Job: Supersoldier
Specialty: Combat expertise, extreme tactical reasoning, and many cybernetic mental, and physical augmentations.
Inventory: MA40 Assault Rifle, MK50 Sidekick

Lv: 1 (You start with 5 level-upgrades you can split between Powers and Skills)
EXP: 0/10
Abilities: Wrist-mounted Grappleshot: Allows users to grab objects from a distance or pull themselves elsewhere.
Smart Scope: Links the weapon's sights or scope to the Spartan's interface, allowing for increased marksmanship even with weapons without a scope


Skills: Master at hand-to-hand combat.
Strength (without armor): Can lift at least 3 times his body weight. Lifted 500 kilograms as a test. His Mjolnir armor improves this by a factor of 5.
Enhanced senses, Speed: Can run up to 60 mph.
Enhanced reaction time: Has a reaction time of 0.02 seconds.
Weaknesses: Energy shields must recharge after taking an extended beating, leaving him open to damage for a few seconds, 
Armor may lock up if exposed to extreme amounts of energy.
Cortana: His AI companion is one of his greatest strengths but also one of his most powerful weaknesses. His care for her extends beyond himself.

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Hello and welcome. It would be an honor for Master Chief to join us! I do have a couple small notes on the sheet. Grappleshot, Smart Scope, Strength, Enhanced Senses, Enhanced Speed, and Enhanced Reaction Time is 6 total points, while I mentioned starting with 5. There's also the matter of Cortana, whose presence is only implied by that last weakness. Having her around is an enormous asset, and something that's a greatest strength shouldn't just count for a weakness.

I would recommend having him start without Cortana, and then encountering her early on in the story. You could also include his Mjolnir armor in his inventory, and mention that the helmet provides HUD aim assistance features without having to use an Ability slot on it. Conversely, having energy shields that prevent damage to him should probably count as an Ability. The sheet is not bad at all, but it's also quite succinct, and since we have some time before the RP starts feel free to add more details to it over time.

For instance, instead of a weakness that's 'in certain circumstance, he can take damage', you could mention 'if his shields are depleted, he's vulnerable to headshots could be killed with by one from anything as strong or stronger than the Sidekick'. And while you mentioned one of his Skills is that he's a master of unarmed combat, I assume it goes without saying that he's a master of any and all firearms, as well?

Hopefully that all makes sense? I don't mean to be nitpicky; I mostly just want to make sure that every power and skill is clearly outlined, without any extras bundled in, and that weaknesses are all relevant and functional. Everyone starts out weak but we'll all build back up as we play. Regardless, we've got plenty of time to hash it out. I'll look forward to writing with you!