[color=808080]Good afternoon, [@Timuir]! I noticed that the character draft sheet is not in this thread, so I will post it here, and update the zeroth post. [hider=Character Sheet draft] Visual Reference - No anime/manga references, please; photography or realistic art Name Alias/es Gender and pronouns Age Height and weight Hair, eyes, skin color Notable physical characteristics - scars/tattoos, missing limbs, etc Family, if any Immune or susceptible to the virus? Role/occupation before and after The Fall Skills Weapon proficiencies Psychological weaknesses and strengths Chronic pains/illnesses Background Any companions (horses, dogs, cats, etc) [/hider] You definitely have some interesting concepts in your character sheet, but I would say it's a little everywhere for the setting. In this setting, we have three major categories of people: [b]Projects[/b] are individuals who went through the Project Genesis. You can find all the information you need about that character concept above. [b]Humans[/b] are individuals who are simply, human, and have no alterations to who they are. [b]Augmentations[/b] are individuals are people who are practically cyborgs. Extremely advanced robotic body parts. From your above character sheet, you seem to have blended all of the categories and made a very hard-to-follow character. You seem to have put very old/traditional aspects into the character (1900s and before) when this is taking place in the current year. It is hard to understand if your character is a project or not from Genesis. If they were, they wouldn't be working for multiple governments, they would be under one, and they would have had a handler or handler(s) depending on how old they were, difficult, and so on. They were not treated like humans and did not get "proper" names or nicknames. For example, SU 2775 is known as that because he was a Soviet Union Project Genesis and that was what they referred to him as or USSR V because he was picked up as the fifth individual they took for their super soldier program during the USSR government control. Projects were not given affection unless there were underlying variables. For example, the majority of Genesis projects were not allowed to touch others UNLESS they were killing them or protecting them. Other than that touch was bad and they would get punished for it. SW017 or known as Freya was a Genesis project by her father, a reason she is an oddity, and SU 2775 touches is because he was used as a breeding stud for the project facility he was in. Animals were not experimented on. They would definitely not become immortal. For augmentations, no one can have access to those unless they have been seen by Doctor Taylor (the beautiful Vixere's character) since she is the developer of that technology and so on. As I said before, you have a lot going on in your character sheet that doesn't fit into this universe. I believe if you have a focus or want to ask questions to build a well-rounded character that would fit in this universe. You can. We will have to decline your character application currently for the above reasons. Thank you for your interest in the thread, if you want to try and build up your character appropriately, please contact me or Vixere, ~ S[/color]