[quote=@Blueflame] [@Memory] I get that it's in first person and about the need italicized in some way to make difference know and that you generally stick the what the five senses of the character are and that if you wanting to make in other than that it needs to be in a way everyone can see almost like a camera in a movie. Other than that I may be a little rusty It's been a while since I've been on here, as for ideas I thought maybe during training with one of her students with gravitational powers opened some sort of wormhole anomaly dragging her through and out the other side [/quote] Yeah, generally the right idea. We use asterisks for *actions* and don't narrate anything. And I'm fine with that explanation—how far along in her out-of-dimension journey would she be?