[quote=@Blueflame] You can kick it of as of the setting Dealers choice, be it one of the group noticing the encroaching darkness or hearing the hushed voices from within that darkness, almost familiar voices, almost your own voice [/quote] Two formatting nits. Throw a newline between action symbols and dialogue for readability and you can change the speaker with Speaker1: I'm talking! Speaker2: I'm talking now!