[@Ocelot79] [@Xandrya] [@Vertigo] [@Squirrel98] [@Estylwen]
I plan to backread this weekend! Hopefully I'll be able to post ic soonish as well! <3

[@Sky Blue]
Hello again! But whoa there! I'm grateful for your enthusiasm and wanting to join this rp, but just as a heads up, you really shouldn't just post in the character tab of random rp without permission. It's best to show interest in the ooc tab first by posting your cs there.

Anyways, there are a few problems with your characters:
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1) Aging is awkward. Your character is 24 and his child is 10 years old. Even though the child is adopted, it still feels too young for a parent with the child being that old. This is meant more as a daycare for toddlers/preschool, not elementary school aged kids. 

2) This rp is all about fears and phobias, so it makes no sense to have a character who isn't afraid of things like death and pain.

3) Military guys are great, but he's a war veteran at 24??
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Please note this is meant as constructive criticism and not me being rude!

And of course, [@Estylwen], what do you think??