[center] [img] https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/c5f0db69-93c1-47ff-8eed-ea88c82b9f8a.jpg[/img] - [img] https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/34b0663e-0aa3-49f7-a05e-0b71e96121f8.jpg[/img] [i]Banners created by Celxstiial[/i] [h1]Welcome to the Voting and Feedback round for MFP#12![/h1][/center] [b]Voting and Feedback guidelines[/b] [list] [*]Please take your time to read through all the entries before voting for your favourite work. The reasons you base your vote on are up to you, as long the vote isn’t based on whether or not you like the author. It would be nice if you could share why you voted for a specific work. [*]Giving feedback is optional but highly encouraged. When giving feedback you should be [b]respectful[/b] and [b]constructive[/b]. It’s good to point out any flaws or the things you feel could be improved or why you didn't like something, but don’t be mean. Make sure to point out what you liked or appreciated in the entry too. [*]Contestants may (and are encouraged to) vote and/or give feedback for the other entries but shouldn’t vote for their own entry. If contestants wish to withhold a vote and only give feedback, that is good too. [*]The entries are anonymous unless the writer asked for having their name added. That being said, writers may claim their work at any time during or after the voting period. [*]The entry with the most votes will win, but in case of a tie a Contest Mod will cast the tie-breaker vote. [*] You can vote for entries and post your feedback in this thread, but if you rather have your vote and/or feedback be anonymous you can PM it to [@Loksfjoer]. [*]The voting period deadline is Thursday 12 September, 9:00 CET, which is 7:00 server time (both times are in a.m.). [/list] [hr] [h1]The Entries[/h1] [hider=A Forever Friend] By [@Artexercise] We met, she and I. The chaser and the chased. In a bed and breakfast. She had coffee, a deathly black. and I a bagel with everything yet nothing makes it so. We sat at separate tables. Just out of reach. "Won't you join me?" she proposed. And I considered the offer. I am always. Considering. "No, I'm waiting," I'd say. There are promises I made, And dreams to keep. Another lily on a stone, And a song to cry before my immortal lullaby. [/hider] [hider=Me and myself] By [@Xandrya] It wasn’t easy; it was hard For that piece of crap metal was once my car The blood slowly inched toward my feet Now there was nothing else but to meet Sirens from near and afar filled the air A sense of sorrow, a sense of despair I took a few steps across the street And knelt down beside the body that was once me [/hider] [hider=Killing Time] He was supposed to be here at this hour, It was not like him to ever be late, Pray tell me by what ungodly power, Could delay thus force me to sit and wait? The clock keeps ticking tick ticking away, And with each passing moment I pondered, Shall I still be waiting for him all day, Or will he repay the minutes squandered? Alas now comes a knocking at my door, There is the visitor I longed to greet I never knew him from my days before, But ever so glad to finally meet. The late gentleman takes me by the hand, As Death shall come to visit every man. [/hider]