[quote=@gobboguy]
[center][h1]Jon Walker[/h1][/center]
[b]Gender:[/b]
Male

[b]Age:[/b]
56

[b]Appearance:[/b]
old, wrinkled, has started graying, with a Stan Lee mustache.

[b]Nationality:[/b]
Australian

[b]Personality:[/b]
Kind, Caring, Thoughtful, Smart

[b]Skills:[/b]
Strategic, not a good fighter, but good at thinking of ways to win a fight, very good at persuasion

[b]IS IT A DESCENDANT? (game show theme plays)[/b]
NO!!!!!!1!!!1!

[b]Equipment/Personal Belongings:[/b]
All terrain gear, camping materials, old family memorabilia

[b]Background:[/b]
was the nerd of his class, always loved archaeology, lived a good family life, had a job as an archaeologist, winded up in the Secret Society after investigating a friend's death (he was in the cult)
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Okay, so besides not having the complete cs, which includes a pic at the top of the cs. It is too bare. You need to add more detail to it, mainly to the appearance, personality, and especially the background, and be better grammar-wise. So work on that, please.