[quote=@Rhona W]
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The picture is fine, thank you for changing it. Sometimes google image results are confusing. 

In terms of the modifications, I can see you made some changes and they're pretty good, but may I make the following suggestions:

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[*]Upgraded avionics; modern radar and flight instruments fitted, including integration with modern weaponry
[*]Internal weapons bay refitted to accommodate modern missiles along with permanent fit of M61 Vulcan cannon; such as AIM-9 Sidewinders and AIM-120 AMRAAM air-to-air missiles, guided bombs, and other ordnance.
[*]Wing hardpoints refitted to accommodate weapons as well as drop tanks
[*]Newer, more modern single-piece canopy fitted for increased view
[*]Improved performance via new, modern engine; giving maximum of Mach 3 performance
[*]Modernised IRSTS fitted 
[*]Red-and-black colour scheme
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Also while your characters' background and such are fine in content, it is a little difficult to read. Could you please review it for punctuation a little bit and also underline and/or bold the section headings? i.e. "[b][u]Appearance[/u][/b]" 

Thank you! 
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Alright thanks.