[quote=@Sky Blue]
any advice for my character? like any edits I need to make? I'm trian's friend by the way, and I made a post in the character tab.
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Nah, looks great. There's nearly no limit or restrictions on characters here except that you want to make it enjoyable for others to interact with.

Look forward to your first post.

Oh and welcome if I haven't already said that :)