[quote=@Chronic]
Here is my CS finally 


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[h3]Character Description[/h3]
[b]Name:[/b] Finley Drake
[b]Gender:[/b]Male
[b]Age:[/b]37
[b]Nationality:[/b]british
[b]Appearance:[/b] [hider=appearance][img]https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/766c2595-acde-46f4-9d2b-5bb75158d537.jpg[/img]Lean and muscular physique. 6 foot tall[/hider]
[b]Personal Effects[/b]:
[hider=1895 Nagant revolver][img]https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/cb6dbba6-0e8b-4a0a-bceb-f6da57764280.jpg[/img]

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[hider=Clothes][img]https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/62c76701-3e39-44df-82db-bc4b468a273d.jpg[/img]With black pants and black dress shoes. No hat 

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[hider= Pipe][img]https://img.roleplayerguild.com/prod/users/81200160-97ba-4908-ab3d-3237f174fed3.jpg[/img]

[/hider]And a small pocket knife. And playing cards, and Small brown Journal with pen.



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[h3][b]Background:[/b][/h3]
[b]What is your job[/b] soldier turned treasure Hunter.
[b]Backstory[/b]:Finlay Drake was born in 1886 into a well-known and respected family in England. As a descendant of the famous explorer Sir Francis Drake, it was only natural that he would carry on his family's tradition of travel and discovery. From an early age, Finlay showed a keen interest in history and archaeology, spending much time studying maps and artifacts. 

When World War I broke out, Finlay felt it compelled him to serve his country and enlisted in the British Army. . He proved to be a brave soldier and was promoted to a respected leader. But the dangers of war befell him, and he returned home from the battlefield a changed man. Although he did pick up rather good aim.

After the war, Finlay struggled to find his place in the world. He yearned for the thrill of adventure and the excitement of discovery that he had experienced during his military service. Remembering the tales of his ancestor's exploits, Finley decided to follow in Sir Francis Drake's footsteps and become a treasure hunter.

His travels took him to Munich, where he had heard rumors of a long-lost artifact that was said to hold great power. Armed with his knowledge of history and his natural instincts for exploration, Finley set out to uncover the secrets of the past and make a name for himself as a renowned treasure hunter.



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Looks generally okay- one question though.  Where did the Nagant come from?  Might be worth something to explain that acquisition.