[@CavnderOHeart] The CS looks really good, you have a great understanding of the role play. There are just a few changes I would like to see. 1. Your first skill, Hunter-gatherer, would need to be gifted from his Wild, and not originated from himself. Humans are unable to harness Abyssal Energy without a Wild. 2. I would like to have a detailed spellbook with descriptions of each spell that he knows. 3. I need an image or a lengthy description of his appearance. Once you give me these adjustments, I will be satisfied.