[quote=@Red Wizard][@Zeroth] Love it! You'll fit in perfectly. If I could make one wish, however, it would be that you elaborate just a little on Auguz most recent history prior to the Maw; what happened when he came to the Westerlands, why did he kill those knights, and how was he captured? Just something to tie him to the game world a bit more. Now, I understand that you could be saving some of that information for in-game revelations, and if that's the case, it's a-ok![/quote] The idea is that he's a more berserk take on the classic Miyamoto Musashi trope: the wandering warrior always looking for a challenge. In his personality section, it talks about how he likes "breaking down" his opponents; that's all due to the tragedy of how his origin played out and influenced how he sees people in general. He set out after leaving his clan and essentially just always wanted to fight whoever he heard of that was "the strongest" or who had some kind of reputation as a swordsman, to prove that he was better than them. A tavern minstrel sings about how Sir Whosoever felled the Bandit King and his 40 thieves? Auguz demands to know where Sir Whosoever lives, and tracks him down. A tournament is held by some local lord who likes watching duelists do their thing? Auguz joins up and wins, but then also tracks down the guys he didn't get to fight. A veteran mercenary captain decides to retire and open up a fencing school? Auguz comes knocking and fights his way through the students, the assistant instructors, and finally the old man. Even if dueling is legal in the context of the world, Auguz just goes about it in such a way (likely killing a lot of people who just "got in the way" in the process) that he's essentially become a serial killer. He also wouldn't be above taking unsavory jobs for coin whenever he racks up too big a bar-tab. He could've been captured in a number of ways---weigh him down with numbers, or heavily armored/mounted/ranged warriors that'd be less susceptible to bladed weapons, or use magic since he basically has no answer to that if he can't close the distance between himself and a mage. Would this be suitable? If you need something more specific, like another story with named characters or something, I'll have to come up with it---it'll take a while and may need further re-writes.