[quote=@Hammy Chi] [hider=Vivrynn] [img]https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/9992e7a8-c018-48ab-ac1a-51d6f55652d6/dbpe5gp-29e81ccd-1e6d-4bdf-96a7-6b90ab501677.jpg/v1/fit/w_828,h_1114,q_70,strp/_cm__bunny_boy_by_astrocat_sama_dbpe5gp-414w-2x.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTM3OCIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcLzk5OTJlN2E4LWMwMTgtNDhhYi1hYzFhLTUxZDZmNTU2NTJkNlwvZGJwZTVncC0yOWU4MWNjZC0xZTZkLTRiZGYtOTZhNy02YjkwYWI1MDE2NzcuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEwMjQifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.rabHr3yoe-ME-jJuW8yBy8IocekfHtdoOClr6zw2aC4[/img] Vivrynn [u]Human Name[/u] Vivrynn ‘Viv’ Ward [u]Species[/u] Kenojian [u]Age[/u] Kenojians age differently than humans, spanning four times their average lifetime (around 400 years). However, they appear to be 18 to 19 years old. [u]Ranger Color[/u] Hopefully, pink, if not any extra color, would do. If I may make a suggestion, maybe the same color as the crimson thunder Ranger from Ninja Storm? Since it's somewhere between the pink and red color, we could call him the rebel rose ranger. [u]Human Appearance[/u] Unlike his teammates, Vivrynn passes most like a human. Despite secretly loving it, he takes advantage of the world's pop culture to come off as an Otaku soft boi. [u]Real Appearance[/u] [u]Personality[/u] I would say he's striving to find one. Living most of his life in isolation, he's never had to lie or speak much to survive so when he does speak or is around other people he comes off as insensitive and closed off. He doesn't mean to be rude, it's just not something he's used to. Something that makes him feel… scared… uncomfortable… excited? He doesn't know yet. Skills Hunting Gathering marksmanship Acrobatics Quick on his feet Tracking Dexterity Powers Heightened senses (Sight, hearing, smell, taste, touch) Agility (don't know if this counts as high jumping ability but basically that and speed.) Background Kenojians are a human-like species with rabbit and or hare-like features (Think Viera from Final Fantasy). They are a predominantly female lead race with females making up around 80 percent of the population. Their beliefs are deeply rooted in nature, managing to live as one with it and creating a society around it. Some even believed those able to talk to nature itself. A voice known through the generations as the wild song. Artists, leaders, healers, and all manner of positions blossomed from this connection. All Kenojians accept the wild song as law even its most unjust demands. When male Kenojians turn 13 they're forced to leave the tribe lands to undergo trials in the vast and savage jungle. Many don't survive the process and those that do are bound to guard the perimeter of the tribe lands with they themselves never allowed access to their homes or each other for comradery, becoming ghosts of the jungle either way. Not all of them make it. Either during the trials or the solitude and perils that come with the job. The age of space travel changed nothing for the Kenojians. Their customs, their culture, and their very existence remain secret to outsiders. That is until a couple of bunny boys decided to sneak their way in on a passing ship… [/hider] [/quote] Okay, so I have looked at your character sheet, and there are some problems, The Gender section is missing, so add that after species and fill it out. You have to list what your character's age is, not what the lifespan of your character's species is. You will be getting pink, so do not worry about that. For the background, did you read the OOC? Since the player characters bearing one are defectors from the Velcon Empire. Not a stowaway on a ship. So, add to the background about them living under the empire, how and why they got assigned to the recon team to recon Earth and the Power Rangers, and why they defected to Earth, and the Power Rangers and later became the new Power Rangers. The rest is fine, bearing the wrong places for the pictures, but I am willing to ignore that given how human your character looks, just as long they use the advanced imperial device to maintain looking human and hide their non-human features. So that is it. Tell me if you have any questions about my review.