[quote=@ctrlsaltdel]
[@Guardian Angel Haruki], let's go ahead and keep ties to one sentence. I like the backstory you've developed, but the tie itself should be just a snapshot of how your character feels about the target of the tie. It's supposed to change fairly often too.

That said, you could probably do yours as "The Crow is a better friend than any human I know" and "Mallory taught me not to trust anyone".

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OK. I'll go ahead and adjust the two ties I have accordingly. Thank you!