[quote=@Dragonydas] <Snipped quote by Eviledd1984> Very interesting character indeed. What exactly do you need help with? Personality and room description seem fine to me. You could maybe go a bit more in to detail for Azir maybe? Like... what exact monster he is for example. [/quote] I just wasn't sure if some of the stuff in my sheet was good enough. I can add in a description and relationship between Sam and Azir.