[@Thayr] Looking at the CS again, there are a few things I wanted to discuss:

1) Shape the earth, I would like a weight limit for this so it's a little more tangible for battles.

2) Numer's Shield, I would like one of the negators removed. You can choose which one. So, fire, electricity, or sound.

3) A time limit of stepping stones of at least once per round.

4) Telekine would only work on inanimate objects.

That's what i got so far. [@ERode], if I missed anything, please feel free to ping in.

I would also like a description of Akkia, and its precise location, so I can add it to the first post.

BUT! Most importantly, I'm seeing a problem here. This roleplay is based around the fight between the Wizard Queen and Duke Rhinecliff. I don't feel like they care enough to really contribute to the story in a meaningful way, as they are only hoping to steal Arrowfell magic to create heaven.

Do you kinda see my problem here? 

Keeping this in mind, I would like you to go through your character again and see if you can tweak their motives. When their motives feel right, then I can accept them. Right now, though, there is a lot of editing to do.