[quote=@Estylwen]
[@Thayr] Looking at the CS again, there are a few things I wanted to discuss:

1) Shape the earth, I would like a weight limit for this so it's a little more tangible for battles.

2) Numer's Shield, I would like one of the negators removed. You can choose which one. So, fire, electricity, or sound.

3) A time limit of stepping stones of at least once per round.

4) Telekine would only work on inanimate objects.

That's what i got so far. [@ERode], if I missed anything, please feel free to ping in.

I would also like a description of Akkia, and its precise location, so I can add it to the first post.

BUT! Most importantly, I'm seeing a problem here. This roleplay is based around the fight between the Wizard Queen and Duke Rhinecliff. I don't feel like they care enough to really contribute to the story in a meaningful way, as they are only hoping to steal Arrowfell magic to create heaven.

Do you kinda see my problem here? 

Keeping this in mind, I would like you to go through your character again and see if you can tweak their motives. When their motives feel right, then I can accept them. Right now, though, there is a lot of editing to do.
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- Shape the Earth has a limit of 100 lbs of afflicted material now
- Removed the negation of fire magic
- Time limit of 1 minute added
- Telekine now only works on inanimate objects
- Added a section to Goals for intertwining Ishkibal with the general timeline
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Akkia is an ancient kingdom, one where a gods-impowered deity-king known as the Lugal Kiš-ki rules over all. Supported by the Lodges, which act as tutoring institutions for magic, Akkia builds and acts in near-everything with the arts of magic from the raising of new temples, the building of roads and tunnels. The geography of the region is notable for a vast number of rivers and wide, sprawling cities dotted by religious institutions and vertical gardens while statues often line the highways and main roads.

Denizens from Akkia, a variant strain of elves, can be characterized by a deeply ingrained self-worth, that grand authority is derived from the general belief that, in everything, Akkia is superior. They rarely travel outside of the kingdom, save to sate their own missions in either enriching themselves or Akkia as a whole.

The lands of Akkia lay some 4,200 miles south from the lands of Arrowfell, across the Porensis ocean.