[@BurningCold] - I adore Kalowick. You did an amazing job of mixing the Old Ways and having an oath to the crown! I really don't have anything to say... other than, could you expand on the [u]Everbranch Border Post[/u]? No need to edit the CS, just so I can add it as one of the key locations for the setting~ (^_^)

[@shylarah] - She seems lovely~ You've got a great start. The only critique I have is, can you explain more about her rune's spells? You listed [b]force[/b], but what does that entail?