[quote=@Mole] [@PrinceAlexus], there are a few grammatical errors, but I usually don’t nix a writer for those on RPG, especially since I make the same mistakes in the same space — abundantly. They didn’t take too much away from the story, anyways. The story is touching, bitter but sweet, cold but warm. I am glad you have seated yourself amongst the winners. ☺️ Thank you for taking my request, [@Loksfjoer]! [/quote] Thanks, it came out pretty good, I was trying to keep them in balence