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[@TheMushroomLord]
Much better, I typically don’t recommend putting all of your eggs into one basket but that’s dialed back enough for me.[/quote]

In hindsight, perhaps waiting until I was once again tired before trying to fix up the writing wasn’t my best thought-through idea, but it’s done now, and I think it’s at least a little better. Was there anything else I needed to fix or am I good to move her over to the Characters tab?