Just a few notes. One, the amount of charges on his Estus Flask should be reduced to 5, but can be kindled up to 15 for his current life by spending humanity. He won't be dying here as often as in his game after all, since that would block participation in a lot of fights. Two, we could probably expand Undeath to include the last place he had a long rest and not just bonfires, since those aren't a consistent world element. Three, abilities should include related numbers, so changing 'allies' to 'up to three allies' would be more explicit. Is that all fine?

Also, how do you envision the black eye orb would be used in this game?