[quote=Gerontis]
@NytefallThink I know you?At any rate, my review :1. ) We don't use the chakra or any kind of pills. They are a bit of broken in fights as they prolong it and thus are deemed to be something we shouldn't use.2. ) The traits are off. Starting genins are fresh genins from the Academy. Its also not possible to make them start with above average chakra reserves and a good chakra control. For an experienced chuunin that would be possible, but not for a genin.3. ) Am not sure about the Kekkei Genkei. Think that hardening and using blood can be interesting, but I will remain neutral over that for now.4.) I would like to suggest to read the rules. The rank of a genin is that they can start with Two C ranked Jutsu and four D ranked jutsu. I shall review the jutsu once you have made the changes in that section.- Gero.
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Okay i understand that, i can rework the jutsus. and the other bits, as for pills they are mainly used in battle to ensure she doesn't die from blood loss, however i can take them out or limit their use to out of battle or during training as well as the amount she carries.

Done some edits. Please review ty :)

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/15895/posts/ooc?page=19#post-564646