[quote=Little Alice]
Nytefall, this is my review.I think you forgot a section. You placed skills and traits together. Am not sure if you noticed, but the CS has two different sections now. Skills and traits. Please see some other CS's if you've having doubts what is correct and what not. Other than that, I am actually going to say I am again a Blood Release Kekkei Genkei. Not because I am against the idea, but the way to balance it is a hassle.That and I find most of your jutsu not really C or D ranked. A D ranked jutsu that enables somebody's blood to melt through metal? To be fair, that would mean its highly corrosive or has a very high heat/temprature to melt through metal. If you would apply that to skin and bone, it would burn right through it. Faster than you would likely imagine. I would suggest to heavily tone the jutsu down. As for the regaining blood while sleeping? I am very against that. Blood that can be used for several things and then be regained like that is not really acceptable in my book. I would suggest to consider why she would need such a release. As I always suggest to newcomers : Think for what purposes you want to use the KG. Only for combat uses? Then better not use it. It will become something dull as you can't really use it for character development and on the long run, it will become not a character you'll enjoy to the max.But that is my review as a Sub GM.
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I understand you concern. However the hardening of her blood as more than just combat uses. For example reinforcing structures helping injured team mates, Creating short bridges. I have removed the acid like blood as i can agree that is quite overpowered. I will be touching up the CS a bit here and there. Consider it still being working on as I would like to see what other GMs make of it and suggestion they have.