[quote=Red Fox]
@Purrfect Several things there are a no go. Genin only have one Chakra Nature, so either Water or Lightning.To your KG, I am going to have to say a no to the second part.As a Genin, having both Good Chakra Control and Higher Reserves of Chakra are not being accepted by me - either one of them alone will be good. Remember, we are talkng about a Genin here.
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edited. although i had thought that while i did have both, i'd scaled them down to not be overpowering. but still, changed XD
as far as the KG ive modified it, and hopefully this fits better?