I know it's WIP, but the description of Seth's personality is too much. I read the whole thing word for word and I felt like I understood him less and less as it went on. The best I understood is that Seth isn't biased, but he also isn't too involved with Glazend's politics and won't force others to change their beliefs. He plays an impartial part in society and doesn't enforce his beliefs and identity upon others. At the same time, Seth also has some morals that he will follow such as loyalty, patience and unity. The rest was all gobbledygook to me. As deep and complex you wish to make Seth, a lot of stuff needs to be cut.

As my high school English teacher always said: "Where's the beef?" That's basically what I'm asking here.

Also, what kind of weapon is Altair?