[quote=benit149]I didn't see that at all. All I saw was a neutral and detached guy with some decent qualities.[/quote]

Ah, but 'crazy' shouldn't necessarily translate to 'full-on psycho'. Right now he's as you said, neutral and detached from normal society. But he's also quietly... unnerved, and confused, if only refusing to acknowledge it himself, hence the placeholder last sentence. He [i]could[/i] become a full-on psycho, or he could become the good type of 'crazy'. Or he could break down altogether. It all stemmed from his past, and ultimately, will depend on how the story grows.

[quote]That's fine and good, but don't forget that this is an RP. They tend to have a bad habit of fizzling out quickly, so I hoping you don't exert too much creative energy in something that could potentially fail. As much as you want to make him a representation of going against the whole 'unique and complex character' thing, I still want him to be easy enough to understand. I want to read his bio and fully understand what he's going to be about in preparation for interacting my hot-blooded dude Melvin with Seth.[/quote]

As I've probably shown, I can't help but pour out righteous amounts of stuff for the things I make. I like to believe that every RP can be special, and it's not like I lose anything anyway, the time was well spent on bettering character creation, after all. Also, rather than going against, it's more like poking at the idea with a stick for laughs and good times, then pulling up a chair and engaging in deep, philosophical debate with it afterwards. My apologies for having left out that important bit, I'll revise the personality part. Hopefully, I can maintain the hilarious prose. But we'll see. For now, just imagine him an intellectual, quiet sort of person with smart-ass tendencies and unfettered purveyor of brutal honesty where deserved, even towards kings and queens, no matter they be prophets or the Devil him/herself. Also, one last thing...

[quote]So let me get this straight about him. Seth has removed himself from the worst of society's issues and prejudices. He has light involvement with Zenterr's military and those folks who look past simple prejudices, preferring to see the bigger picture. But since society as a whole fails to see the 'big picture' that Seth sees, he's isolated himself from the prattle and is slowly going crazy from the world's ignorance, unable to find many like-minded people who share his view.[/quote]

Close, but not quite. I realized the segment of my post that you quoted missed one 'not', where it was repeated. I don't know how that happened, but in my original post it was repeated intentionally. I meant to say he's no Hannibal Lecter, and is just simple-minded enough for people to be able to control him.

That's all for now, and thanks for the detailed response. I'll continue working on him.