My post is up, and if anyone struggles or has a qualm please tell me. I wish to make sure I am not bringing down the quality or drive! I am attempting to work on the post structure. (maintaining past tense in narrative while having the character think in present) Italics for explanation or Important thought. *bows* I appreciate any and all critique. (also if you have a problem with how I am handling the character starfire. Do not hesitate. I am basing her off of her maturing personality, but also considering the fact that she is still aloof due to her rather powerful skill set and lack of real repercussions (Also Should I ignore the wedding that got scrapped between her and Nightwing? Or would you like for me to have her still twinged with the lover scorned?))
Wow that was alot sorry.