Looks good.

I have my lengthy exposition prologue + Melvin intro post ready, but I'll churn it out later tonight. ;)

EDIT: Uploaded story post, so let's get this thing rolling. I also added a date system, where the ten months of the year are named after the Thaumae and have 30 days each. Their chronological order is the same order I wrote them in the intro post (Undine, Efreet, Sylph, etc.). It's the night of Martel 14, so the news of Melvin's attack will reach Izumo during the day on Martel 15.