[quote=Mistress Dizzy]
Name: Jinayah IfritiAge: 10Gender: FemaleSexuality: She's 10 and still thinks sex is gross.Appearance: Jinny is small and skinny, and looks like an 8 year old. She has dark skin, and black hair that's sort of dry and tangled. Her eyes are deep, deep black, a product of her mutation. They seem to suck in light, but not shine it back.Mutation(s): Jinny's eyes are very to light. In full daylight, she can be rendered blind if she ventures out without her goggles. Even on a less sunny day, she'll be squinting and in a bit of pain. But the benefit of her mutation comes at night: with the benefit of a light source as small as a flashlight, Jinny can see for several feet in front of her, as if it were a moderately sunny day. This has kept her safe, as she can move and hunt while most people are asleep. During the day, she wears a pair of covered goggles and tries to find somewhere safe to relax.(s): Hunting Knife. Gear: Large backpack, strips of roast rat meat, nuts, bolts and other mechanical tidbits, mini set, multitool (aka Swiss Army knife)Faction: (Leave blank for now)Currency: $10, mostly changeShort History: That's what I've got so far. Anything that's missing besides the history?
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The CS is a little bare, I'll review it again once the short history is added. However, saying this I can't exactly say anything is missing. So I suppose the correct term would be concise, not bare.

Anyway, I'm off to work now and will be back on around 10 or 11pm GMT+0 time. Hope to see the rest of the CS' and I'll more than likely make the first IC post so you won't be waiting anymore. Until then, happy hunting!